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Tablesaw Tablesawsen ([personal profile] tablesaw) wrote2009-01-28 01:19 pm

Theory, Politics, Addiction, and Loss.

In a discussion with [livejournal.com profile] tahnan in the comments to my post on language and cultural appropriation (in addition to some guestions about language and linguistics), I added some clarifications that I think probably deserved to be in the main entry. So I'm adding them here.
The next question may be, "And now what?"
I've written a few different things to answer this that have been lost on different computers. Had I not been falling asleep on Sunday, I would have continued the essay with a bit about politics. Because the problems that I'm focusing on and that are being focused on in the failboat debacles involve both society-wide systematic oppression and the denial of that oppression.

Recently I listened to a story on PodCastle by Peter S. Beagle called "Gordon, the Self-Made Cat." It made me feel bored and annoyed, instead of amused or interested or intrigued. I believe this is because, to build the meanings and reactions intended by the author, the reader needs to have a certainly amount of love for the cuteness of cats or the antics of cats. I really have neither of these things.

So is that a "problem"? Well, Beagle may have intended for his story to be "universal" (among English readers/listeners), and now I'm telling him that it's not. But there isn't systemic, societal, institutionalized oppression against people who don't think that cats are as cute as everyone else does. And most writers in Beagle's position would probably accept and take responsibility for the fact that the story excludes parts of its potential audience. In a sense, most genre writers do this in that their writing caters to a specific audience of readers who have already read and have read within the genre. The attitude is "You can't please everybody."

The toolmakers paradigm does require a certain amount of "you can't please everybody" thinking when it comes to published work. The communication is static and directed at a wide audience, so the writer can't clarify himself with every reader individually. So a certain amount of failure by exclusion is accepted by the writer (especially writers working within a "genre"). But if a writer doesn't accept that this is happening, their communication can suffer (as currently the case with [livejournal.com profile] tnh and the "this is not at all a threat" argument). And when the exclusion falls along patterns of oppression that exists across society, then the writer becomes an active part of that oppression.

Because issues like the cat-antic exclusion are not politicized, it's easy for a writer to accept these exclusions and even to, in a sense, retroactively intend to do so. This fits the interpretation back into the conduit metaphor; if a reader reports a problem that the writer did not intend but that is acceptable to the writer, the writer can admit to having put it in the text when writing (though perhaps not fully consciously). But when the issue is politicized, like racism, sexism, etc., the writer resists doing so and denies responsibility for what is made of their writing.

If all the writers involved shifted gears and said, "Well, yes, I take responsibility for excluding non-white readers, but I'm not going to change, even though I could; you can't please everybody, and I'm just never going to care about pleasing readers who aren't white," there would still (hopefully obviously) be a major problem. But it would be different from the one we are currently witnessing. Instead, writers are, on the surface, professing a commitment to anti-racism which would mandate changing their attitudes and their writing, but they avoid doing so by either arguing that they cannot/need not/should not take responsibility for the exclusion reported by nonwhite readers or arguing that it is impossible for them to make any changes to themselves or their writing that would fix it. In some cases, both.

The toolmakers paradigm demands that a writer be responsible for all failures of communication, no matter how wide the audience; and real-world politics demonstrate where those failures or systemic and problematic. The toolmakers paradigm also demonstrates that the way to effectively change the situation is to account for the culture and context across the systemic divide.


I've also been thinking very particularly about this line:
If all the writers involved shifted gears and said, "Well, yes, I take responsibility for excluding non-white readers, but I'm not going to change, even though I could; you can't please everybody, and I'm just never going to care about pleasing readers who aren't white," there would still (hopefully obviously) be a major problem. But it would be different from the one we are currently witnessing.
I may have spoken too soon about that, because there are writers who are emerging from these discussions bearing (or perhaps merely threatening to bear) this very attitude. As an example, one SFF writer, [livejournal.com profile] davidlevine, has written "My only statement on the cultural appropriation imbroglio," which concludes:
I may or may not continue work on this story [that features a black character as one of its protagonists]. Haven't decided yet. Maybe I'll write something safer, something where all the characters are white, or aliens or cartoon characters or disembodied spirits, and I don't have to deal with issues of race and culture. I'll spend my writing time and energy on other issues instead.

This statement is addressed to those on the "anti-racist" side of the debate who have vehemently accused certain white writers and editors of racism or cultural insensitivity:

Is this what you wanted?
The answer is No, when readers asked writers to acknowledge the racism in their work by offering examples of how that racism has harmed them in reading, they did not want those writers to turn around and adopt a bald-faced policy of racism to guide their future work.

I do find it hard to understand how a person, confronted with a chorus of voices angry about racism, could construct the meaning that the chorus desires more racism. Perhaps a clue is in the idea that writing a story "where all the characters are white" means not having to "deal with issues of race and culture," as though white people have no race or culture, or "issues" or problems only arise when the race or culture isn't white. Perhaps Levine and others are confused because the options that they feel are available are criticized as equally racist, and because they don't comprehend the other options offered.

I start to think that a mind can become addicted to the benefits of white privilege just as it could to any chemical. And in turn, I think that the mind can build up the same protections to prevent the source of the addiction from being removed. Denial, hostility, even a sort of phantom pain, the palpable discomfort felt when the discussion turns to race—the brain throws all that and more in the path of an addict to prevent them from even thinking about their addiction. And they work so subtly, so insidiously, that time and time again, predictably across addicts from all walks of life, the addict concludes, after almost any evidence, that really, all things considered, being totally rational and objective, I truly don't have a problem, everything's fine, and nothing needs to change.

It takes something massive for that mindset to be replaced. It could be an addict realizing that they are at "rock bottom," that things have gotten so bad that there is finally no choice but to overcome the blocks and examine their problems. But the nature of racism and privilige is that, unlike addictive chemicals, privilege There will never be a day when a dour face in a white coat tells you that you're dying of cancer contracted by benefitting from oppression without attempting to end it.

It could also be an intervention, when a group of people get together and tell a person they care for how the addiction has harmed them. To confront the addict with the results of their actions that don't affect them directly. And the intent is not to effect an instantaneous, miraculous, total change, but simply to get you to admit that there is a problem. You have a problem. If you see it, we can fix it, but you have to see it.

But interventions are no guarantee. Sometimes loved ones scream and yell, and they accuse their friends and family of conspiracy, and they deny the stories of pain, and they leave alone, and they find relief, for themselves, alone.

I don't know where to go with this metaphor. My family has lost people because we couldn't find the right way to communicate and break through to loved ones with addictions. But it needs to be done, for all our sakes.
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[personal profile] cnoocy 2009-01-28 10:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Perhaps Levine and others are confused because the options that they feel are available are criticized as equally racist, and because they don't comprehend the other options offered.


I've been thinking about this, because I think this is something that is very clearly happening, and I'm not sure how to counter it. Many authors seem to be saying, "Hey, my colleague $AUTHOR doesn't write characters of color at all, and he gets left alone. Why shouldn't I do like he does?"

The metaphors I keep coming up with involve calluses or Plato's cave, which gets at the necessity to expose oneself to a painful adjustment and possible pain afterwards in order to expand one's perceptions, but that doesn't pull in the damage done to others by people blinding themselves to privilege.

[identity profile] swan-tower.livejournal.com 2009-01-28 10:21 pm (UTC)(link)
I do find it hard to understand how a person, confronted with a chorus of voices angry about racism, could construct the meaning that the chorus desires more racism.

Apropos of the problems of communication: I did not read David Levine's post to mean that at all. What I read was one individual saying, I've been working on this story, and I think/thought it was a step in the right direction both for me and for my genre (by including rather than excluding), and I'm trying really hard to do it right -- but man, this entire blowup has made me so afraid of Doing It Wrong that it makes part of me want to retreat back to what's "safe," only writing about white people, so that at least I won't be pilloried for writing a black character inappropriately.

I'm not Mr. Levine, obviously, but I don't think he believes the chorus wants more racism. I think he's saying that their efforts are in some respects counterproductive: that they've intimidated some people, him included, in the direction of the racism of exclusion, for fear of committing the racism of misinterpretation. "Is this what you wanted?" is a question for rhetorical effect, to point out the fact that it probably isn't.

In one respect you're right about the fallacy of "white" = "no race or culture," but you also have to grant that there's been a lot less heat around, say, the representation of French characters, than there has around the representation of African-American characters. Regardless of the issues in the story (for the characters), it's much less likely to become an issue outside the story (for the readers).
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[identity profile] vito-excalibur.livejournal.com 2009-01-29 06:24 am (UTC)(link)
[livejournal.com profile] rydra_wong said it first, somewhere, but: Mr. Levine is not paying attention. No one is getting jumped on for the books they have written. The problematic racial elements of Ms. Bear's book were critiqued by two people, one of whom explicitly said that she enjoyed the book anyway.

The reason people are getting jumped on is because of the dumbass stuff they have said on LJ.

If he really wanted to avoid criticism, it seems that a better plan would have been to make sure his book was good and avoid blogging! I can certainly tell you that it is his blogging, not his books, which is resulting in his being laughed at all over LJ now.

[identity profile] swan-tower.livejournal.com 2009-01-29 08:14 am (UTC)(link)
Let me quote from him again -- sorry for the length:

Your reactions to the written works and Internet posts of my friends who are also trying to do the same have made me question even the attempt. The height and breadth of the heap of spleen that I have seen dumped upon my friends is more than just "lumps" -- it's something I wouldn't wish on my worst enemy. This slapfight, dogpile, shitstorm, whatever you want to call it, has been so severe that I am wondering if I should even try. I've seen those who try, in all good faith, have their heads torn off and thrown back at them, and when they react to this abuse as any normal person would, they are accused of being whiny and oversensitive.

Now, I haven't followed every nook and cranny of this discussion -- at this point, I think that would be a full-time job -- so I can't be sure I've seen the same things he has (and I probably haven't, since I've tried to stay away from the most explosive loci). But I presume, based on his phrasing, that "those who try, in all good faith," extends not just to the writers of books but also to the writers of Internet posts.

Given the situation he describes, I can draw one of two conclusions: either all of the "lumps" have been completely justified, such that anyone who objects to them is indeed "whiny and oversensitive," or some of the "lumps" have been counterproductively negative, discouraging those who are trying to be part of the solution. (That "some" may be anything from a tiny percentage to a fair bit; who can tell.)

The former strikes me as falling into the fallacy of assuming everyone on the "unprivileged" side of the debate has been correct in everything they've said -- that they've never descended to nastiness of the sort Mr. Levine describes, or if they have, it's always been justified by someone else's behavior. (And that's pretending there's only two sides to the debate anyway, "privileged" and "unprivileged." Which is bogus.) So I expect there are some people who, in the heat of the moment and driven by whatever personal factors, have said things that cross the line and become destructive, even to the cause they're trying to champion. In other words, what's being described here.

If he really wanted to avoid criticism, it seems that a better plan would have been to make sure his book was good and avoid blogging!

You say "make sure his book was good" as if it's a simple matter of making a choice, but this debate has resoundingly proved that it's anything but that easy. And "avoid blogging" just shuts down dialogue on the matter -- sweeping things back under the rug, where nothing gets done about them.

I'll be frank: I've seen a few rounds of this debate before, but the violence of this iteration has not only made me doubt and second-guess every attempt I've made to write a minority character in my own fiction, it's made me reluctant to even blog about my thoughts, for fear the next explosion will be on my own LJ -- and that, in running around trying to respond to everyone's comments, I'll proofread something I've typed only twice instead of four times and so accidentally let through a phrasing that implies something I didn't mean. In other words, fear has driven me to shut my mouth, rather than attempt dialogue with other people. (And typing that, I wonder if someone's going to come along and tell me I should shut up rather than make comments like this one -- which tells you how hostile I perceive the situation to be at this point.)

I don't think scaring people into silence is a good result for anybody on any side of this debate.

I wish this had been an explosion of the type that sent dozens or hundreds of writers away feeling inspired to do better. But I've been seeing, again and again, the implication of the reverse: that it has discouraged people and convinced them they can never get it right, and that it's safer and less offensive to just not try. Is this what anybody wanted? I doubt it.
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[identity profile] elusis.livejournal.com 2009-01-29 08:45 am (UTC)(link)
Ah yes, because being criticized is just like having your head torn off and handed back to you (http://www.amptoons.com/blog/archives/2007/05/23/q-since-when-is-being-criticized-like-having-your-limbs-blown-off-by-a-landmine-a-since-that-criticism-came-from-someone-with-less-privilege-than-you/).

Seriously, that guy's response looks like he wrote it with tabs open for all the various excellent "how to suppress discussions of racism" blog entries I have tagged, and used them as an outline.

has not only made me doubt and second-guess every attempt I've made to write a minority character in my own fiction

Good. You should live with those doubts. They're one of the best tools you have as an author for checking your privilege and keeping you honest.

And as far as your fear? The ability to choose to remain silent on the topic of race because it's too hard to confront your fear of being called out is white privilge at its best. Don't lay that at the feet of POC and their allies to solve. That is not their problem; that is YOUR problem.

it has discouraged people and convinced them they can never get it right, and that it's safer and less offensive to just not try.

Yeah, seriously, won't somebody think of the white people?

[identity profile] swan-tower.livejournal.com 2009-01-29 07:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Ah yes, because being criticized is just like having your head torn off and handed back to you.

That isn't what I said. Since I haven't read all the things he's read, I can't say whether individual pieces of it should be described as "criticism" or "having your head torn off and handed back to you." What I did say is that I'm not going to make a blanket assumption that every single critical comment made has been fair and justified, any more than I'm going to make the blanket assumption that every single one has been unfair and cruel. People being people, and the spread of this debate being what it is, the odds approach 100% that people on both (or all) sides have said things that have made the divisiveness worse instead of better.

Good. You should live with those doubts. They're one of the best tools you have as an author for checking your privilege and keeping you honest.

Doubting and second-guessing how I'm doing it, yes, absolutely. But doubting and second-guessing whether I should even try? That's where I feel it stops being useful (to anybody) and starts being detrimental.

That is not their problem; that is YOUR problem.

One of the problems of having this debate online is that it spreads like kudzu and ropes in all kinds of people who don't know each other from Adam. I don't think you and I have ever encountered each other in a comment thread before, at least not that I can remember, so if I say "I'm working on my problems" you either have to take me at my word, or judge me by the few pieces of evidence you've seen, which would (from the sound of it) lead you to believe I'm thoroughly buried in my white privilege. That lack of context is almost certainly contributing to the kinds of communication problems [livejournal.com profile] tablesaw started out by describing.

But, with that danger in mind, my two thoughts are:

1) I'm working on my problems.

2) Saying "that's your problem, not mine," carries an overtone of opposition that I wish didn't permeate so much of this debate. I'd rather it were cooperative. NOT in the sense of putting the burden on [whichever group] to educate the [white people or other privileged group], who don't have to put out a lick of effort, but in the sense of not framing it as "Us vs. Them" (whichever side is "us" for the speaker).

You're right that choosing to remain silent (not write PoCs) is white privilege. But if the effect of the debate is to drive people who were trying to correct that flaw in themselves back in the direction they came from, I don't think that's "won't somebody think of the white people?," because if we're talking white privilege, what does it matter? It doesn't hurt us to stay silent! But it hurts the genre, and the community, and it undoes some of the progress toward inclusiveness and understanding.

And that's something I care about a great deal.
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[identity profile] ladyjax.livejournal.com 2009-01-29 10:54 pm (UTC)(link)
2) Saying "that's your problem, not mine," carries an overtone of opposition that I wish didn't permeate so much of this debate. I'd rather it were cooperative. NOT in the sense of putting the burden on [whichever group] to educate the [white people or other privileged group], who don't have to put out a lick of effort, but in the sense of not framing it as "Us vs. Them" (whichever side is "us" for the speaker).

I just want to offer a thought at this point.

I think in some cases, cooperative action isn't possible until the parties involved have sat in rooms *away* from each other and hashed some things out and then come back together into another room with some agreed upon rules of how the discussion will flow.

That's what a lot of organizations do with anti-racism training: whites go into one room, PoC into another with a place to come together at the end. There's other stuff to get through within your home group (as it were) before you can even think about tackling the bigger problem.

And unfortunately, too many recent efforts to say, "this is how you might go about correcting the problem," turns into hand holding and a need for approval before the work is ever really engaged. The burden keeps falling backward on to PoC as opposed to white authors holding *each other* accountable.
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[identity profile] elusis.livejournal.com 2009-01-30 12:02 am (UTC)(link)
Since I haven't read all the things he's read, I can't say whether individual pieces of it should be described as "criticism" or "having your head torn off and handed back to you."

It's OK: you don't have to read every single thing someone else has had written to/about them in order to conclude that being disagreed with or criticized for your privilege is in *no way* like experiencing actual violence or oppression.

Did you read the essay I linked to that talks about why this kind of "critique = violence" language is absurd?

Doubting and second-guessing how I'm doing it, yes, absolutely. But doubting and second-guessing whether I should even try? That's where I feel it stops being useful (to anybody) and starts being detrimental.


Well, if you define "anybody" as "you," or maybe "white people."

White writers hesitating and doubting whether they should write about people of color and marginalized experiences and cultural symbols, rather than doing so unhesitatingly, brashly, and badly in a way that further deepens the alienation of readers of color and the stereotypes held by white readers is absolutely a benefit to people of color.

As for your problems and your work on them, I wouldn't presume to speculate since you're right, I don't know you. However, turning posts about cultural appropriation and ways in which the words and actions of white authors can harm people of color into "this is really HARD for white people" 1) suggests to me something about where you personally (and the people with whom you seem to be sympathizing) are in that work, and 2) opens the topic of you and your work or lack thereof up for comment.

If you're going to argue that talking about white privilege hurts "the genre" and "the community," and "progress toward inclusiveness and understanding," I am just going to go over here and sing kumbaya with Teresa Neilsen-Hayden's' "nithing," "stupid" trivially-preoccupied naysayers because I do not think those words mean what you think they mean.

[identity profile] swan-tower.livejournal.com 2009-01-29 07:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Since this is your journal, you've probably gotten a notification of my comment to [livejournal.com profile] elusis above, which includes most of what I would say to you here.

On the topic of "easy," though -- I'm thinking back to your own points in the previous post, though, about communication. A writer can go through steps 1 through 4, but when it comes to taking action -- to writing -- is it easy to get it right, to make the book good? Not necessarily. I've had any number of arguments with friends over whether a really problematic issue in a book was put there by an author who knew it was problematic and meant to question it, or unconsciously replicated by somebody who had no idea there was any problem at all. If communication were a conduit, it would be easy. But what I loved about your previous post was the explication of why effectively communicating what's in your head to somebody else's head is a process fraught with peril.

[identity profile] caprinus.livejournal.com 2009-01-28 10:44 pm (UTC)(link)
The answer is No, when readers asked writers to acknowledge the racism in their work by offering examples of how that racism has harmed them in reading, they did not want those writers to turn around and adopt a bald-faced policy of racism to guide their future work.

I dunno, [livejournal.com profile] karnythia's response to the same post sounds like she'd be OK with insularisation.

I only came across this whole imbroglio last night thanks to your previous long post (or rather, I only then put together the scattered posts on the topic I've seen into the greater framework I had not been aware of) and have been catching up with little time to process or react. Thought provoking. I hope you don't mind a belated comment or two when I get the chance to really read it through.

[identity profile] inkylj.livejournal.com 2009-01-28 11:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Hey, I'm enjoying these posts, but could I get you to lj-cut them? They're seriously dominating my friends page, and I'd like to come back and read them separately.

[identity profile] joshroby.livejournal.com 2009-01-29 06:09 pm (UTC)(link)
If all the writers involved shifted gears and said, "Well, yes, I take responsibility for excluding non-white readers, but I'm not going to change, even though I could; you can't please everybody, and I'm just never going to care about pleasing readers who aren't white," there would still (hopefully obviously) be a major problem.

Tony, I see an implication in your argument that you may or may not intend. Is it then unacceptable for a writer to write for a white audience? Whether we're talking about the writer's entire body of work or just one novel or short story, it seems to me that the writer should be able to choose their intended audience — especially considering the number of artists who claim that the work comes to them and not the other way around.
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[identity profile] elusis.livejournal.com 2009-01-29 11:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Well then be honest about it. "I'm writing for a white audience and I don't care about any other readers," rather than "WHAT I AM A GOOD ANTI-RACIST PERSON AND YOU ARE WRONG FOR SUGGESTIONG OTHERWISE!!!LEVENTY!"

There's a reason that some African-Americans say they prefer life in the South to the North, where people will just give up their racism to your face rather than pretending they're progressive and then doing the Same Old Shit behind your back.

[identity profile] joshroby.livejournal.com 2009-01-30 06:30 pm (UTC)(link)
And if the author is honest about it, what, it makes her an honest racist?
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[identity profile] elusis.livejournal.com 2009-01-31 01:13 am (UTC)(link)
Yes.

[identity profile] joshroby.livejournal.com 2009-01-30 06:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Other things: choosing an intended audience and excluding a particular audience are very different things.
I don't see how you do one without the other.

If you are talking about artists who claim that a work "comes to them" and that they have no control over their own output, then they are at a level of denial about their work in general that is far greater than this discussion is addressing.
Well, yes, I was just trying to be polite and include the artists who believe this sort of thing. ;)

To put a finer point on it: if I wanted to write a novel for white america, if I wanted to target an audience that lives in quiet little suburbs in the Midwest, if I wanted to write about the conflicts and travails that occur in white neighborhoods (whatever those might be), am I being racist doing so? Can white people talk to white people without it being racist?
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[identity profile] spiralsheep.livejournal.com 2009-01-29 10:36 pm (UTC)(link)
when readers asked writers to acknowledge the racism in their work by offering examples of how that racism has harmed them in reading, they did not want those writers to turn around and adopt a bald-faced policy of racism to guide their future work.

That literally made me laugh out loud.

Thank you for these posts.

[identity profile] icecreamempress.livejournal.com 2009-01-29 10:46 pm (UTC)(link)
No, when readers asked writers to acknowledge the racism in their work by offering examples of how that racism has harmed them in reading, they did not want those writers to turn around and adopt a bald-faced policy of racism to guide their future work.

That is the most concise and elegant explication of this I have seen. Bravo!

[identity profile] yhlee.livejournal.com 2009-01-30 12:18 am (UTC)(link)
Hey--I haven't been commenting, but thank you very much for these posts. I really appreciate the theoretical perspective you shine on the whole thing, and it's given me a lot to think about. (I mean, not that this is all about me, but I figure if I can Learn, I can try to Do Better.)

[identity profile] metonymy.livejournal.com 2009-02-06 04:20 pm (UTC)(link)
This is an excellent post, and I apologize for coming to it so late with a question, but: it looks like in this paragraph you may have deleted or something and a sentence got cut off? In the fourth-from-the-end:

But the nature of racism and privilige is that, unlike addictive chemicals, privilege There will never be a day when a dour face in a white coat tells you that you're dying of cancer contracted by benefitting from oppression without attempting to end it.

Again, though, I found this post really thought-provoking. Thanks. (Here via rydra_wong, though late because I got distracted from RaceFail '09 by personal-level fail. Woo.)